Crimzen
ĸazeĸage
Posts : 151
Join date : 2011-06-24
Age : 28
Location : In the ninja world :3
 |  Subject: Third Person  Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:53 pm | |
| wнaт ιѕ тнιrd perѕon ѕpeecн? тнe υѕe oғ тнιrd-perѕon pronoυnѕ ѕυcн aѕ нe, ѕнe, and тнey тo relaтe evenтѕ ιn a worĸ oғ ғιcтιon or nonғιcтιon.
υѕe тнιrd wнen role-playιng, aт leaѕт тype 3 ѕenтenceѕ. role playιng тнιѕ way can вe loadѕ oғ ғυn! ιғ yoυ wanт υѕe вeттer graммer and мore deтaιl, тo geт yoυr-roleplayιng parтner or anyone wнo ιѕ readιng мore oғ wнaт yoυr cнaracтer ғeelѕ!
Non Example - "ι walĸed тo a тree and ѕaт down ѕтarιng aт ιт."
Perfect Example - "crιмzen walĸed тowardѕ a cнιpped тree нe ѕaт down glarιng aт тнe ғaιnтed claw мarĸѕ. нe нυғғed and ѕтood, cloѕιng нιѕ eyeѕ concenтraтιng, ѕlowly a вlυe мιѕт ғorмed aroυnd нιѕ вlacĸ paw, cнarĸa! a nιnjaѕ тool ιn вaттle, lιғe, and even тraιnιng. a large ѕмιle нad grown acroѕѕ тнe мaleѕ ғace, нe placed нιѕ paw on тнe ѕтυмp and ѕтarтed тo clιмв. ѕυddenly тнe cнarĸa нad dιѕappeared, craѕн! crιмzen нad ғallen вacĸwardѕ oғғ тнe тree and ιnтo тнe dιrт. "oυcн.." нe groaned, ѕlowly rollιng over onтo нιѕ pawѕ. нe looĸed υp тнe тree and ѕaw нιѕ claw мarĸѕ ѕlιgнтly нιgнer тнan prevιoυѕ oneѕ. crιмzen ѕмιled, ғellιng onтop oғ тнe world, нe ѕwιѕнed нιѕ тaιl.
"well.." нe ѕтarтed, "ι won'т geт anywнere jυѕт ѕтandιng нere."
Helpful Hits:
- тry noт тo υѕe тнe ѕaмe word over and over, ιnѕтead oғ 'cold' υѕe 'cнιllιng, ғroѕтy, cнιlly, ғreezιng, ecт.'
- вe мore deтaιled aвoυт wнaт yoυr wolғ ιѕ ғeelιng, ιnѕтead oғ 'ѕad' υѕe, 'lonely, dιѕappoιnтed, тeary eyed, υpѕeт' eхт.
- don'т υѕed тнe word 'and' тo мυcн υѕe a coммa.
- нavιng тroυвle ғιndιng wordѕ тнaт мaтcн looĸιng тнeм υp нere!
- http://dictionary.reference.com/?o=100074
(ιғ yoυ нave anyтнιng тo add jυѕт conтacт crιмzen!)
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